The bear looks up soundlessly, with its brown fur
shining in the sun.
I can hear the roaring water of the waterfall like it
is a thunder storm.
I can taste the cool spring water as it splashes on my
face.
The brown and orange autumn leaves are slowly falling
in a trance as if they want to enjoy their time in the air.
The mountains are going as high as the clouds with the
little snowflakes making at the top of the mountain be completely covered with
the white powder.
The trees are as high as you can imagine. With thick
brown oak in which they are home to many critters.
But my character, which is a Gartner snake, was in a paragraph form. Honestly, the snake was pretty boring. I tried to make it interesting by describing the bite and the fangs. The vignette is...
The snake was all coiled up. But it was still ready to
strike, giving you a false sense of security like the calm before a storm. The
snake deceives us. The snake has black scales with two white lines on the side,
the trait-mark of the Gartner snake reminding us that it is not venomous. But
that doesn’t mean that there bite cannot hurt us. There fangs are like needles
piercing the soft skin, blood quickly squirting out. The white fangs locking
their jaws into the flesh. It is better to just stay away. The red forking
tongue hissing in and out of the mouth sensing the world all around them.
After we had finished our vignette's, we had to find eight pictures to put in a miniature scrapbook. When I found the pictures I gave it to my teacher for her to scan. Then we started a movie. The movie was called "Never Cry Wolf." The movie was about a man who went and lived in the wilderness for 6 months studying wolves. After about 40 minutes into the movie went and ate lunch. The movie was pretty slow at the beginning, but when we came back from lunch and finished the movie, it started to become interesting. He ended up staying in the wilderness for the rest of his life which I think is a very foolish mistake because I would want to be around my family. After the movie we started working on our blog.
This is the Gartner snake I wrote my vignette about.
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